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Post by sam on Dec 4, 2014 6:18:27 GMT -5
How would you better improve this motto "strive for excellence, using innovation" to keep the message but make it more flowing for a business?
(Business studies)
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Post by Jarl Matt on Dec 4, 2014 6:23:34 GMT -5
Innovate for Excellence.
No need for strive or using,
It now has much more eloquence,
So now you're really cruising.
GET AN A BRAH.
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Post by sam on Dec 4, 2014 6:46:19 GMT -5
10/10
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Post by TsarNicholasII on Dec 4, 2014 18:23:16 GMT -5
( sam) Well to use repetition... "Strive for perfec tion, using innova tion" "Achie ving perfec tion, preser ving innova tion" (I tried to find a verb that would retain the "v" sound before the "-ing" to keep a more audible use of repetition, "preserve" is not a synonym of "use", but it still makes for a good slogan.) " Perse vering to perfec tion, preserving innova tion" (I personally like this one the best, it also contains large amounts of repetition, but at the same time, it is only subtly placed apparent.) |
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Post by sam on Dec 4, 2014 18:24:47 GMT -5
Thanks
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Post by TsarNicholasII on Dec 4, 2014 18:26:32 GMT -5
You're very welcome! Anytime, Sam!
Upon clicking this, I thought you were going to discuss some Trigonometry (judging by the thread's title).
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Post by sam on Dec 4, 2014 18:30:49 GMT -5
You're very welcome! Anytime, Sam! Upon clicking this, I thought you were going to discuss some Trigonometry (judging by the thread's title). Haha wow I feel dumb It was 1am and I wasn't concentrating, should have been "Sam's Homework Angels" |
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